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The Holocron of Swamps of Dagobah

Re: The Design Holocron of Swamps of Dagobah (Play Test Phas

I just noticed a little typo (the first letter of the Bio is doubled ^^).

I'll wait 1-2 days to let you the time to review the pdf and then correct it. :)
 
Re: The Design Holocron of Swamps of Dagobah (Play Test Phas

Looks great overall. I do see a couple typos.

In the first paragraph, there are two T's in This. In the Victory conditions paragraph, "immediatly" needs to be "immediately".


Edit: partial :ninja: :)
 
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DanieLoche said:
Here it is, finally ! ^^

Sorry for the delay, my internship takes me a lot of time, and I was trying new tricks and images for the design. ;)

Swamps of Dagobah
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Corrected.

I just noticed another typo : the colors for the start zones was wrong. ^^ Besides that, I found nothing more... Just tell me guys. :)
 
Re: The Design Holocron of Swamps of Dagobah (Play Test Phas

Added it to the OP @DanieLoche, let me know if there is any changes and I will fix it in the OP before a final vote.
 
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TREX said:
Added it to the OP @DanieLoche, let me know if there is any changes and I will fix it in the OP before a final vote.
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No problem as I can update the PDF without changing its link. ^^

But all-in-all I think that we have the final version. :)
 
Re: The Design Holocron of Swamps of Dagobah (Play Test Phas

Cool, then without further ado, lets take a final vote on this one and get it finalized.:thumbsup: for me.
 
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That is 4 of us then so far and we need 75% (5 of 6) for it to pass. Lets see if we can drum up one more vote before this passes on time.
@heroscaper2010 @Ninja Status
 
Re: The Design Holocron of Swamps of Dagobah (Play Test Phas

Sweet! This one passes and is released then. Need to make sure it gets added to any map indexes. Thanks again for taking this one over and bringing it home Trex.
 
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Nice job BoSS!
 
Re: The Design Holocron of Swamps of Dagobah (Play Test Phas

Found a couple issues:

Bio says: This jungle world full of hostile swamps and creatures is a dangerous place...

Should say: This jungle world, full of hostile swamps and creatures, is a dangerous place...



Clarification says: Marro Hives are not to be placed on the map...

Except the map build instructions and images do not show the Hives, so this should be removed.



Jan Dodonna message says and should say:
A recon droid has detected a powerful glyph on the forgotten swamps of Dagobah. We gathered a small group to recover this artifact before the Empire discovers discovered it. But , but when we arrived it was too late...

...a strange creature is living there and which prevented us from...

...not sure if we have any survival chances chance of survival now...
 
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Good to have you back Porkins, you always seem to spot things others overlook and you make this project better for it.
 
Re: The Design Holocron of Swamps of Dagobah (Play Test Phas

Thanks for your help Porkins ! :)

Porkins said:
Clarification says: Marro Hives are not to be placed on the map...

Except the map build instructions and images do not show the Hives, so this should be removed.
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Not exactly... ^^ the map build instructions shows the 6-hex piece of the Marro Hive. So the clarification should be there.

For the rest, I'll change the pdf ASAP. :)
 
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OK. I didn't see the 6-hexers in the build instructions, and the hives are not in the map image. Thanks for doing the pdfs!
 
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@DanieLoche, give me a link to the final pdf and I will change the main title name to Holocron instead of Design Holocron. Also fixed final edits in the OP.
 
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TREX said:
@DanieLoche, give me a link to the final pdf and I will change the main title name to Holocron instead of Design Holocron. Also fixed final edits in the OP.
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I just made the updates. It's still the same link as above. ;)
 
Re: The Design Holocron of Swamps of Dagobah (Play Test Phas

Thanks, I'll change the main title in the thread and we are all finished. Awesome. Great job everyone that participated on this fun to play addition to BOSS.
 
The only thing missing is a half submerged X-Wing Star Fighter in that amazing marsh map. Nice work - BRAVO!
 
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Just seeing we never came up with a Set Name here. Any ideas? I was looking for an idea for the Bespin Platforms Map thread I just started up, maybe have all the ESB themed maps have one set name.
 
Yodaking said:
Just seeing we never came up with a Set Name here. Any ideas? I was looking for an idea for the Bespin Platforms Map thread I just started up, maybe have all the ESB themed maps have one set name.
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Not sure I follow. Do you mean something like a "set of Bespin maps". Kind of like how there are a group of Death Star maps, and a set group of Hoth maps.
 
Take a look at some of the earlier map threads and you will see that they have a release name at the top of the FP. Some say Master Set 1: A New Hope. Then look at the FP in this thread, it just says Set Name. So we can either name the maps after some of the boosters that were released for ESB even though they came out at different times, we can just give all out maps based around the same movie one 'set name' regardless of when they are created and released, or we can do something else entirely.
 
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