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The Holocron of Swamps of Dagobah

Re: The Design Holocron of Swamps of Dagobah (Play Test Phas

Thumbs up for me, I like the map and have played at least 10 games on it. I have since took it down. I feel like it is good to go. I'm just waiting for everyone to finish up with it.
 
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Huh. Could've sworn I gave a thumbs up for this...

I vote :up:
 
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Cool, it looks like we can start finalizing this one. @DanieLoche, when you get a chance maybe you could again work your pdf'in magic.:). Then I will add it to the OP. Good to see another one of these getting finished.
 
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This map is in Final Editing then!

Looking at the Bio, here are some suggested edits.

Map Bio - A dangerous and deadly place for adventurers and explores and armies alike. This Jungle world full of hostile swamps and creatures, was made home to the small exiled Jedi Master Yoda after Order 66 was put into effect. Later revisited by Luke Skywalker who sought to seek out the old Jedi Master to complete his training.

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Map Bio - A dangerous and deadly place for adventurers and armies alike. This Jungle world full of hostile swamps and creatures, was made home to the small exiled Jedi Master Yoda after Order 66 was put into effect. Later visited by Luke Skywalker who sought out the old Jedi Master to complete his training.
 
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Looks good yoda, updated the OP with your extra enhanced version.:)
 
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I'll make a pdf asap. :)

An idea for the specific bio for the scenario ? (heroscape scenarios always has a global background for the map, and then a specific background for each scenario).
 
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I don't think this map has a true scenario, just some optional rules that have been tested. A scenario should have more specific armies or objectives.
 
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Map Bio - A dangerous and deadly place for adventurers and armies alike. This Jungle world full of hostile swamps and creatures, was made home to the small exiled Jedi Master Yoda after Order 66 was put into effect. Later visited by Luke Skywalker who sought out the old Jedi Master to complete his training.
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The last part is not a complete sentence. It needs to say something like:
"Yoda was later visited by..."
or "The Dagobah Swamp was later visited by..."
or "The old Jedi Master was later visited by Luke Skywalker who yearned to complete his training"
or "Luke Skywalker visited Yoda during his exile in the Swamps of Dagobah."

or something...
 
Re: The Design Holocron of Swamps of Dagobah (Play Test Phas

I'll take a longer look at it later, I was just trying to do a quick edit as the bio as is didn't read very well to me.
 
Re: The Design Holocron of Swamps of Dagobah (Play Test Phas

Bumped this one. Are we bout ready to finalize this one.
 
Re: The Design Holocron of Swamps of Dagobah (Play Test Phas

Here is an updated Bio.

Map Bio - A dangerous and deadly place for adventurers and armies alike. This Jungle world full of hostile swamps and creatures, was made home to the small exiled Jedi Master Yoda after Order 66 was put into effect. The power of dark side cave close by masked his presence from the Sith Lords who searched the galaxy for his whereabouts.

I think we just need the completed pdf to vote for release.
 
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Yodaking said:
Map Bio - This Jungle world full of hostile swamps and creatures is a dangerous and deadly place for adventurers and armies alike. It was made home to the small exiled Jedi Master Yoda after Order 66 was put into effect. The powerful dark side cave nearby masked his presence from the Sith Lords, who searched the galaxy for his whereabouts.
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Tried to make it a little more fluid. Also, the first sentence sounded awkward. Same idea, just re-worded a little.
 
Re: The Design Holocron of Swamps of Dagobah (Play Test Phas

Cant wait to see it DL, your pdf work looks awesome.
 
Re: The Design Holocron of Swamps of Dagobah (Play Test Phas

Maybe say, "...after Palpatine's Order 66..." in the bio.
 
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Koolster25 said:
Map Bio - This Jungle world full of hostile swamps and creatures is a dangerous and deadly place for adventurers and armies alike. It was made home to the small exiled Jedi Master Yoda after Palpatine's Order 66 was put into effect. The powerful dark side cave nearby masked his presence from the Sith Lords, who searched the galaxy for his whereabouts.
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@Porkins added
 
Re: The Design Holocron of Swamps of Dagobah (Play Test Phas

Here it is, finally ! ^^

Sorry for the delay, my internship takes me a lot of time, and I was trying new tricks and images for the design. ;)

Swamps of Dagobah
 
Re: The Design Holocron of Swamps of Dagobah (Play Test Phas

Looks fantastic! A pre-:up: for me for release.
 
Re: The Design Holocron of Swamps of Dagobah (Play Test Phas

Looks great DL, Vote me a thumbs up as well, great to get another one finished. After a final vote, I'll change the OP.
 
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