Bio Blurb: In the thickly forested rural lands outside of Gotham City, a sprawling marsh is hidden in the mist. The green fog the swamp exhales adds an air of foreboding to the surroundings, chilling many a traveler to the bone and sending him on his way. Perhaps that’s a good thing though as, according to legend, this swamp is the not so final resting place of something terrifying indeed.
The DOs in the terrain count & setup still have the DOs listed from an earlier version.
Would add a comma here:
Bio Blurb: In the thickly forested rural lands outside of Gotham City, a sprawling marsh is hidden in the mist. The green fog the swamp exhales adds an air of foreboding to the surroundings, chilling many a traveler to the bone and sending him on his way. Perhaps that’s a good thing though as, according to legend, this swamp is the not so final resting place of something terrifying indeed.
Besides that, looks good!