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Fan Fic Contest - Are you the best writer?

Well done you two. This was quite difficult.
I narrowly give the win to Elven Lord. Strong start as I loved this line: 'In the center of that tiny oasis of oak, peeking up from a rolling sea of worries, sat a book which the general had just finished reading.'
Really enjoyed the cat behavior and the magic. Always wanted to add a Song Weaver magical class to my RPG. I did feel it went a bit long at the end but really solid throughout despite not being what I expected.

TheAverageFan delivered more what I had in mind and actually made me laugh at loud with this line: “Well, you’ll be disappointed to know you’re not exactly my favorite faction.”
And summoning an Old One in a holodeck swindle and capture was pretty top notch.

Grats to both of you. Thanks for indulging me. :)
 
Rats. I suppose my entry was fairly half-baked when it came to the actual writing—it reads more like a screenplay than actually bothering with prose or clever wordage. Yes I'm aware that I'm claiming my submission which took 16 more days than EL's to submit needed more time in the oven

Ball is in your court, EL. What is your prompt?

~TAF
 
Rats. I suppose my entry was fairly half-baked when it came to the actual writing—it reads more like a screenplay than actually bothering with prose or clever wordage. Yes I'm aware that I'm claiming my submission which took 16 more days than EL's to submit needed more time in the oven

Ball is in your court, EL. What is your prompt?

~TAF

Are you kidding? That was half baked? My mind wandered off for a week after reading yours cause I was like "Yeah, he's got the win." Hahaha. I really loved the multiple plot twists. I never knew exactly what to expect. I was trying to read bits and pieces while working but ended up just reading the whole thing at once.

I'll have a prompt out for y'all before I go camping this weekend. Just wrapping up work for the day then I'll put some thought into it.
 
Well done you two. This was quite difficult.

I narrowly give the win to Elven Lord. Strong start as I loved this line: 'In the center of that tiny oasis of oak, peeking up from a rolling sea of worries, sat a book which the general had just finished reading.'

Really enjoyed the cat behavior and the magic. Always wanted to add a Song Weaver magical class to my RPG. I did feel it went a bit long at the end but really solid throughout despite not being what I expected.

TheAverageFan delivered more what I had in mind and actually made me laugh at loud with this line: “Well, you’ll be disappointed to know you’re not exactly my favorite faction.”

And summoning an Old One in a holodeck swindle and capture was pretty top notch.

Grats to both of you. Thanks for indulging me. :)

Preciate the callout on that line. I'm particularly proud of it :D
 
Ok champions, friends, and (hopefully) newcomers here is the next prompt in our Fanfic contest. I tried to come up with something new and thought provoking.

Utgar is a deeply misunderstood general.

Word cap 10k.
 
Ok champions, friends, and (hopefully) newcomers here is the next prompt in our Fanfic contest. I tried to come up with something new and thought provoking.

Utgar is a deeply misunderstood general.

Word cap 10k.

I would like to submit my two most recent fan fictions. ;)

~TGRF, who will give it some thought.
 
My apologies to The Animals
Spoiler Alert!
 
I've got some ideas. I'll need time to flesh it out into a fully-formed entry.

~TAF, updatingly
 
Ok champions, friends, and (hopefully) newcomers here is the next prompt in our Fanfic contest. I tried to come up with something new and thought provoking.

Utgar is a deeply misunderstood general.

Word cap 10k.

I would like to submit my two most recent fan fictions. ;)

~TGRF, who will give it some thought.

I should probably read more of your work. I did not get the idea from your stuff though ;)
 
As much as I would like to jump in, it probably won't happen this time around. I don't actually have any ideas for a story based on the prompt, and I need to devote attention to work since it's the first week on the job.

If something randomly pops into my head and I can write it, I will of course let you know.

~TGRF.
 
Good thing too. My entry's hit a roadblock and I'm still sorting it out. Hopefully I don't need to drop out if it can't come together.

~TAF
 
Okay, apologies for all the delays! I hit a big roadblock last week, and by the time I sorted that out I encountered a second big problem (which I will detail in my Author's Note after the entry). Irregardless I have finally completed this and will submit it now.

All you need to know for this entry going in is that Concan's official bio says he took a long time to choose sides in the war, and also an official map of Valhalla might not hurt either given the number of region names dropped in the story (enclosed below):

Map:
Spoiler Alert!


Oh, and also that TGRF could potentially sue—given the amount of inspiration this draws from his own Utgar stories. I'd be curious to see how he views my take on the character :ponder:

Entry:
Spoiler Alert!


Author's Note:
Spoiler Alert!


The contest is heating up!

~TAF
 
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Oh, and also that TGRF could potentially sue—given the amount of inspiration this draws from his own Utgar stories. I'd be curious to see how he views my take on the character :ponder:

Now you have me intrigued. I'll try to carve out some time to read it.

~TGRF.
 
Ok champions, friends, and (hopefully) newcomers here is the next prompt in our Fanfic contest. I tried to come up with something new and thought provoking.

Utgar is a deeply misunderstood general.

Word cap 10k.
First time poster, on-and-off lurker.

Is this still open? :p.

Hey Heinrich Hierarch. Are you still planning to enter?

Edited because I'm silly.

Edit 2: Hierarch can have more time if he needs it, but if we don't hear from him, I'll judge it this weekend.
 
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Ok champions, friends, and (hopefully) newcomers here is the next prompt in our Fanfic contest. I tried to come up with something new and thought provoking.

Utgar is a deeply misunderstood general.

Word cap 10k.
First time poster, on-and-off lurker.

Is this still open? :p.

Hey Heinrich Hierarch. Are you still planning to enter?

Edited because I'm silly.

Edit 2: Hierarch can have more time if he needs it, but if we don't hear from him, I'll judge it this weekend.
No, sorry. I've only gotten a few snippits written nothing ready. Thought I had the time, turns out time had me :grrrr:.
 
Ok champions, friends, and (hopefully) newcomers here is the next prompt in our Fanfic contest. I tried to come up with something new and thought provoking.

Utgar is a deeply misunderstood general.

Word cap 10k.
First time poster, on-and-off lurker.

Is this still open? :p.

Hey Heinrich Hierarch. Are you still planning to enter?

Edited because I'm silly.

Edit 2: Hierarch can have more time if he needs it, but if we don't hear from him, I'll judge it this weekend.
No, sorry. I've only gotten a few snippits written nothing ready. Thought I had the time, turns out time had me :grrrr:.

Ah yeah. I've been finding that to be increasingly true the older I get.
 
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